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Spirit Woman #7

Spirit Woman #7

Beside the colored waters,
Painted pots, bubbling hot,
Mighty fountains are rumbling,
As to the air they're shot.

Formations of the mighty,
Wonders of the earth,
The multi-colored dangers,
And massive mountain girths.

The Spirit Woman wanders
Lost in pensive thought,
The tide is flowing westward,
And many battles fought.

The fox watches closely
Behind the reddened stones,
Where he lies hidden,
Worrying thought as if a bone.

Keen eyes ever wary,
Nose twitching from smells,
Here among the cauldrons
Of the earth's heaven-hell.

The Spirit Woman is restless,
The earth speaks in rumbles,
And wind that spoke softly
Now makes fitful mumbles.

The waters no longer laughing,
They run cold and hot,
She can't find a balance,
No peace in this spot.

Visions of Ghost Dancers
About a distant campfire
Invincible seeming warriors
With revenge their desire

Now the fox grins slyly
His careful plans laid,
Maybe she'll be receptive
But he's sore afraid.

Life's taste is bitter
As the waters of death,
And the peoples are dying
As once did his breath.

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http://www.hanksville.org/daniel/lakota/Ghost_Dance.html

— Rett, Dec 27, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Rett

the Saga continues, and as usual lovely to read, you do know that the Spirit woman will never rest while her people are still scattered, and how they are and treated the way they are. Need to get Sitting Bull back again, Yours Ian.T
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Right you are Ian

She will never rest and who knows when she will pop up. Until things change for her people she won't rest. Things are better, but only marginally. I have noticed a growing respect for "the people" over the years, but it is not what it should be. I am glad that at least one person is enjoying this history. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett
Debra Bryant

Debra Bryant

17 years 5 months ago

Rett,

People all over this site have commented to me about your rhyming...and as I read I understand it more. Is this what would be referred to as B/D rhyming? Or am I completely missing it? Sincerely; Debbie
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Debra, you are correct

It is a B/D rhyme scheme. I tend to use it probably more than any other, but I do use other rhyme schemes. The B/D scheme lends itself to most poems more than any other rhyme scheme. You got it in one. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Janice

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett