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Faith Story

Starry-eyed child full of dream and delight,
Same yesterday, today, and tomorrow,
When did morning turn to dusk, then mid-night?
The image in the mirror speaks sorrow.
Whose ghostly face is this, crumbling with age?
Don’t be bewildered by what eyes can see—
Run free with the lion; escape the cage;
Life’s a rumor about what will next be.
Faith story—what you say is what you are.
Travel the unknown to places unseen;
Hitch the heart’s heart to that far-flying star;
Soar above mountains where you have not been.                                            
Look through the dark glass to find the true face,
Unburdened child awaits now His embrace.
— deelilah, Dec 26, 2008

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Lonnie

17 years 5 months ago

A poem of 'Faith' indeed!

Great writing, Deelilah! You have captured the true essence of what it is to have human failings and yet still have the faith to overcome them! Congrats on a well-penned piece!
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Lonnie

I'm really glad you liked this. It's a good thing I've captured that essence as it seems the failings come at a faster rate than the overcomings. Thanks for reading and commenting. Deelilah
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barbsdad2003

17 years 5 months ago

Thanx ...

for this. I find most poignant the line When did morning turn to dusk, then mid-night? Assuming (I think rightly) there's a best in this piece, I think this line's it. Yours, Chuck
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

I agree with Chuck

and I think this poem fairly reeks with good writing! Respectfully, Rett: "It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside." Purplemoondoll
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Chuck and Rett

Well, how did it get to be midnight so bloody fast? So glad you like the poem. Thanks for the encouraging words. Yours Deelilah