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Dec 25, 2008
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Wine
Wine
There's a meadow hidden deep
within the dark recesses of your mind
where all the happy memories
are stored for you to find
and all the dreams and wishes
you thought you'd left behind
are waiting like buried treasure
stored within the vaults of time
and memories float on gossamer wings
weaving golden threads of thoughts sublime
that dance and frolic on the tongue
and taste of salty tears
and love's sweet wine.
There's a meadow hidden deep
within the dark recesses of your mind
where all the happy memories
are stored for you to find
and all the dreams and wishes
you thought you'd left behind
are waiting like buried treasure
stored within the vaults of time
and memories float on gossamer wings
weaving golden threads of thoughts sublime
that dance and frolic on the tongue
and taste of salty tears
and love's sweet wine.
— Rett, Dec 25, 2008
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Critiques
Stella
17 years 5 months ago
This is a lovely little
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Thank you Stella
Robert Melliard
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Rett
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Thank you Robert
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Rett,
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks Eddie
Linda Moses
17 years 5 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks a lot Linda
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Shh, don't tell anyone I have a soft side
Nordic cloud
17 years 4 months ago
Yes we are rich
Rett
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you Ann