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The kind of pubs you liked

The kind of pubs you liked were dark inside
and full of odd-shaped corners,
where candles dripped pale wax
down bottles on to old oak tables.

Reached by narrow, leafy roads,
they had sheltered, bushy gardens
where hedgehogs sniffed around
at dusk, on dampening lawns.

The kind of pubs you liked
had strange, old-fashioned recipes,
and sold absurd, forgotten wines,
like damson, birch or gooseberry.

They were less efficient, probably,
than modern, franchised places,
but more authentic, warmer,
and several centuries older,
lovingly - and luckily -created.
— Robert Melliard, Dec 24, 2008

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Region, Country: Asturias, Spain

Favorite Poets: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Du Bellay, Metaphysicals, Petrarch, Dante, Baudelaire, Lorca, Becquer, Coleridge

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Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

17 years 4 months ago

Damn

In a good way. I love the rhythm and flow of this piece. As I have an affinity for this type of pub it was like a memory of a homecoming I've not yet had. I'm sure if I looked and picked long enough I could find something to suggest but I have to admit, I just want to enjoy this poem. Well done sir. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)