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Dec 24, 2008
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The kind of pubs you liked
The kind of pubs you liked were dark inside
and full of odd-shaped corners,
where candles dripped pale wax
down bottles on to old oak tables.
Reached by narrow, leafy roads,
they had sheltered, bushy gardens
where hedgehogs sniffed around
at dusk, on dampening lawns.
The kind of pubs you liked
had strange, old-fashioned recipes,
and sold absurd, forgotten wines,
like damson, birch or gooseberry.
They were less efficient, probably,
than modern, franchised places,
but more authentic, warmer,
and several centuries older,
lovingly - and luckily -created.
and full of odd-shaped corners,
where candles dripped pale wax
down bottles on to old oak tables.
Reached by narrow, leafy roads,
they had sheltered, bushy gardens
where hedgehogs sniffed around
at dusk, on dampening lawns.
The kind of pubs you liked
had strange, old-fashioned recipes,
and sold absurd, forgotten wines,
like damson, birch or gooseberry.
They were less efficient, probably,
than modern, franchised places,
but more authentic, warmer,
and several centuries older,
lovingly - and luckily -created.
— Robert Melliard, Dec 24, 2008
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Jonathan Moore
17 years 4 months ago
Damn