Hospital Stay

This is a concise evocation of a harsh time. I hope it isn't about you or a friend or loved one. Whoever it's about it's sad. I think 'confine' should be 'confined' (penultimate stanza) and 'month' should be 'months' (last stanza). By the way, what is an MRI? Best Wishes, Robert.

Barbara dear I hope and pray the doctors "find the cause this time". I can imagine how you feel, from this poem and also from your poem " The Pain Of Scoliosis". I love your determination Barbara, and I pray to God for your health and to grant you more tolerance and patience. I like the way you express your feelings in your poems, as I have felt it we feel somewhat contented when we express what we feel.. Our prayers and sympathies are with you. Love, Wafi

I can understand. My son in law is a chronic back pain patient, after being injured on the job. He was a police officer. Get well soon Sincerely,Linda

mom died seventy years old guess she was in hospital or home not sure my brothers daughter has bone marrow cancer shes fighting it spent lots of time in my girlfreind spent a year and some in the psych i was in and out and in and out my girlfreinds dad is ill depressed crying and in hospital now i feel like im getting sick again i can relate to this story Barbara I feel very sad very sorry that you have to endure this You comment on my poems with an honest approach empathy its a good christmas here yet part of me is barely hanging on I hope they can help you Merry Christmas also

this one caught my attention because of title and date. unfortunately, I spent christmas in the hospital and hope that I don't have to go back again soon. I sincerely hope that all goes well for you or whomever this piece was inspired by. sometimes miracles happen, so never give up hope. love and respect, Kata