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Nature Mithya
Dec 22, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Unification (Marked to be a Human Dragon Part III)

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— Nature Mithya, Dec 22, 2008

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Power

You seem to have so much paranormal power that you make me envious! I can't understand everything but I like the bits I understood. Best wishes and Merry Christmas, Robert.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks

Kindly read part one and two and you will understand it a lot better. I took to write about the subject in a story form. If you like It I shall try to go further but lol without erotics I know no one will like it. Just fantasy. Thanks for reading and the comments. With respects.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 5 months ago

oh nature,

the best of your work with erotic content reflects your nick- nature. This feels like a hotchpotch of ideas with some truly icky moments. especially- "paranormal power surges...surrenders herself to my whims" and "I dream of genetically engineered clones in highly active breeds" Did you mean a certain shock and eeeww factor with these adolescent male fantasies? cheers, Jess "They that give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

The story continued from part one and part two.

Firstly logic is an important factor. Dragons are very powerful and cannot become humans. Worst Humans can never become Dragons. Here a she dragon chooses her man and marks him with her sign and by telepathy informs him that she has changed to a Human form just for him and whenever she is near him this mark will move actively beneath the skin. The second part 'fire' with the first kiss the human form (male) takes the she-dragons power from her so he can dominate her as a human. With Unification, the DNA's of the she-dragon have tilted to human side so they can Have a new generation of .... The last two lines are were added for a higher level of human form taking shape in the union. Lol, I choose a she dragon, it could have been a male-dragon too.Don't have to worry for women will always dominate in the end.We see it daily in real life.