Moon Dance

I really felt winter here its cold and clear smell of winter time. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

I know I'm kinda late with this, but... This is an excellent piece of poetry, invoking a depth of feeling in me that's startling. The sense of private intimacy about to end is extremely powerful to me. So is the vulnerability. Really really good write Respectfully, Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

I feel death at the end this time. I did not notice it with the first read. Winter is the death of all life starting with spring, summer and then fall which prepares nature for winter by stripping away all of spring and summer’s beauty kind of like we human. In our youth, we are young, vibrant and beautiful. Then we shed our beauty of spring and summer in the middle ages of our fall. It's like our spring of youth and summer of adulthood is stripped away during our fall of middle age and finally in our winter of death we slowly die as we age like the foliage of the earth does underneath the chilly winters. You have a wonderful write here. This is what I took from it. Probably off my rocker reading into poems things that is not there. My (16 year old)son says I read between invisible lines a saying I never heard before he said it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Not sure now. I think the cross in your picture influenced me lol. It is a lovely read and I enjoy it much. Respectfully Yours, Barbara