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Bloody Red

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— Nature Mithya, Dec 18, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Hi nature,

I tried to read your poem (Bloody Red) but it didn't come up on my screen. I don't know if other people are having the same problem. Best wishes, Robert.
washing tears

washing tears

17 years 5 months ago

i read this and fried egg,

i read this and fried egg, then a few other random ones of yours, and i have to say i am very impressed with your word choice, and how you choose to word everything, i like it alot and i envy the fact that i dont have that ability thanks for sharing washington fear
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks for the chat the other day and the comments you post.

I can not ever accept that one does not have the ability. It is within each one of us, only we have to look deeply with in us and become conscious of it. In life as a child we first see life as illusions, then we learn to observe, see the shadows as they move with us; finally to interact with life in resonance. Place words with resonance and you have a good write. That is why i was insisting you like your poem only then will others enjoy your write. Will try to look up your poems and comment on ones I like. Thanks.