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Dec 17, 2008
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Thirteen - Magic Gone
The Magis’ magic’s
Sudden fall
Made humdrum and offending
All
That before was filled
With glee.
Boxes yarded from the tree
One atop another
Filling all the space.
Before excited what to find
Always first to see,
To wait, to gladly open
What others and the Saint had left.
A boy now sees for first and ever
No matter how intended,
The ordinary bought to please.
More and more
when one would do.
Or none.
His father gone, for him to wait
Perhaps in another re-enchanted place,
Struck him that
these are all we are,
Save giving more enduring grace.
Sudden fall
Made humdrum and offending
All
That before was filled
With glee.
Boxes yarded from the tree
One atop another
Filling all the space.
Before excited what to find
Always first to see,
To wait, to gladly open
What others and the Saint had left.
A boy now sees for first and ever
No matter how intended,
The ordinary bought to please.
More and more
when one would do.
Or none.
His father gone, for him to wait
Perhaps in another re-enchanted place,
Struck him that
these are all we are,
Save giving more enduring grace.
— ArrowWords, Dec 17, 2008
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Robert Melliard
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Arrow,