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Dec 16, 2008
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Happy Birthday, Dad....
Fifty-seven years of life have gone by
through changes, and stresses, and love gone dry.
Retired from the military
and now the Federal government
a part-time diesel mechanic
is now how your time is spent
Through foreign wars
and unknown waters
did twenty-two years fly.
I still remember the fear
from when you were put on standby.
For another foreign skirmish
with yet another country.
You were packed, and ready to go.
to wax a dangerous Iraqi.
We may not be as close as we once were
and I know that I'm often a brat
but know that you're still my dad
and in some ways, I'm still thankful for that.
Happy Birthday, Dad.
through changes, and stresses, and love gone dry.
Retired from the military
and now the Federal government
a part-time diesel mechanic
is now how your time is spent
Through foreign wars
and unknown waters
did twenty-two years fly.
I still remember the fear
from when you were put on standby.
For another foreign skirmish
with yet another country.
You were packed, and ready to go.
to wax a dangerous Iraqi.
We may not be as close as we once were
and I know that I'm often a brat
but know that you're still my dad
and in some ways, I'm still thankful for that.
Happy Birthday, Dad.
— infinite_dwarf, Dec 16, 2008
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zarul
17 years 5 months ago
jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 5 months ago
Zarul
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Good one Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 5 months ago
Rett
Robert Melliard
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Jess,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 5 months ago
Robert
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
honestly Jess, tributes seldom make good poetry
infinite_dwarf
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks, Jess!
jean-louis bouzou
17 years 5 months ago
Nice tribute !