ad infinitum.

Wow! Very beautiful Proprietress.. That's it, I think it's perfect! ~Stella

I had to read it twice, the second time it came first in the way of poetry. I think that this is very good, and from the inside ,Yours Ian.T

Really liked the opening stanza. Good stuff here. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Does Rudolph fail the safety inspection if his nose is burnt out? And where does he go? I don't think he'd fit in the bay at the Jiffy Lube." Happy holidays, y'all!

what I love about this one is how one can read it as a whole or as three different poems. Good stuff, Ink

I like this one, it has a moody glow to it. Floats along quite comfortably

this has a darkness to it that draws me in... I've read it three times and it gets better every time... what melts inside your fear... great line! Richard

Congrats on the Spotlight position my proprietress!! You deserve it!! : ) ~Stella

another major new voice on the site and I didn't even know. Gonna commission 3 new clones right now to catch up with my backlog of reading. And smack ronda and ink on the wrists for not introducing me. cheers, Jess "They that give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin.

A great skill is required to write a poem in such a style.

funny that we have two completely different works that mirror each other not only in title but if i am not mistaken...in theme of some sort as well...you tell me... http://www.neopoet.com/node/5845 again...done with true skill...bravo! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ 'My prayer is a rapture in blue' - The Ink Spots 'My Prayer' 1939

of finesse the More I am remembering the amounts and levels I did read of Poetry Every town or city I read in libraries taking many books out at once per month some skimming and others sectional reading from chapter titles and Poetry from cover to cover and then Biography Autobiography I love this whole poem I either missed it or chose not to comment then I could forensic like go back to the date and see what I was writing for parellism compare but no need today Joy of this site is to post works and update them and to be able to rediscover an amazing beautiful poem like this "what melts inside your fear what did you start to dissappear? .." that is a cool cool line my freind!!! I like!

like listening now to versions of Ian Curtises "love will tear us apart" Sextons letters and poems and McKeowans live readings memorized (all died young) Something about it that cuts through lifes basic bullshit written from the heart from the source of pain where sharpness both gives us purchase like animals to fight or flee (claws) for passion Its why I have always admired your poems and comments since first coming here You never vacillate nor cover what is anger and hurt with sweetness to turn sour in personal As you know and im learning there is no need There is a higher lever of being and people that exist beyond a new leadership of business and heart I do go over the old grounds and fires even though its painful there is some kind of wretched beauty in it a clarity that comes about for me anyway maybe I should be in a niche market even more distant then this site it will come forth when the time is right in the meantime i shall post and I tell you this is a most beautiful poem writing in a professional splendour thank you Kata!