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Dec 16, 2008
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Commemorative Coins from Obamaland
HEY! The new emperor's finally here!
And he's still wearing his own clothes;
Lending credence to the fact, that he's not as dense, as our last one.
However, his other traits must remain "suspect";
for those traits remain to be seen.
For instance,what of this man's integrity?
Will he succeed in keeping all of his promises...
..or will they merely fade away, like a cheap scarf in the noon day sun?
That, my friends...only time will tell;
and then, we'll run around telling each other!
And what about this man, and his Commemorative Coin sets?
They're Official enough, and even quite handsome.
But he hasn't done anything.....yet!
AHhhh....but,it does seem to make some "sense".
For, his platform and his campaign promises were, after all.....all about "change"!
And he's still wearing his own clothes;
Lending credence to the fact, that he's not as dense, as our last one.
However, his other traits must remain "suspect";
for those traits remain to be seen.
For instance,what of this man's integrity?
Will he succeed in keeping all of his promises...
..or will they merely fade away, like a cheap scarf in the noon day sun?
That, my friends...only time will tell;
and then, we'll run around telling each other!
And what about this man, and his Commemorative Coin sets?
They're Official enough, and even quite handsome.
But he hasn't done anything.....yet!
AHhhh....but,it does seem to make some "sense".
For, his platform and his campaign promises were, after all.....all about "change"!
— docmaverick, Dec 16, 2008
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Robert Melliard
17 years 5 months ago
Hi ther,