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Nature Mithya
Dec 15, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Body Dialect

Effervescence


— Nature Mithya, Dec 15, 2008

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Country/Region: india

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Hi nature,

This poem gives the impression that you make love extremely well in India. Perhaps it's due to all those fiery curries, or perhaps to a tradition that goes back thousands of years (I've seen those erotic sculptures in your temples - thanks to travel documentaries). There are some lines in which I find the meaning unclear, but when there's so much passion around who cares about grammar? Best wishes, Robert.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Ambigious positioning of words...

...create a suspense like atmosphere. Well India is no exception, love is every where world wide, only one has to experience it within a conscious state. The poem was written keeping in mind a contest at allpoetry.com. Erotic with out being explicit is like the reader slowly learning to remove the veils from his mind; to the joys of the act. Thank you you liked the poem.There are many more like this one in my collection here. Thanks for the comment and for reading the poem. In fact the pleasure is mine to see you enjoy.