When I Find Myself...

how much I like your poems, and this one is no exception, only I can´t help feeling it might not be quite finished... Breaks off kind of abruptly... Regards, ID

Lady Blue, Some nice double entendra here, and clever between the lines inference. Title as part of first line, "...find myself dark and damp...lonely in my refrain" And the nice ending..Title plus "reading, READ, and enlightened." Nice. wcw

Good transition from what you see to what you want everyone else to see. At first, it's just you that has read the words, held the message, held the information - and then you post it, and everyone else becomes enlightened too. Excellent write. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Does Rudolph fail the safety inspection if his nose is burnt out? And where does he go? I don't think he'd fit in the bay at the Jiffy Lube." Happy holidays, y'all!

fourteen lines (not counting the space) I love the way you write I soak in your poems like winds before a rain steady and exciting the darkness tinged with distant flashes you delve words of interest (for me) always a pleasure to read

"Lonely in my refrain" .. definitely a fav line ; ) Love the first stanza, it holds so much truth ~Stella

I just had to return to this one, and as it did evoke the feeling you wanted it to convey, like you said in your comment, who am I to argue? Regards, ID

love this, its as if you wrote it from inside me. cheers, Jess "A poet's work; to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world and stop it going to sleep." Salman Rushdie

Lovely poem sorry I missed it before now. Their is a lot here that is not being said. I can feel the meaning behind these special words. Great write. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

How beautiful. How wonderful you updated it So I could find and read it. Sincerely Jim "An armed populace is the last defense against tyrannical government": Race

you already know I like the way you write... but this is truly a work of art... glad to have the chance to read such a poem! Richard

For me this poem neatly sums up the satisfaction we get from communicating with our readers. Best Wishes, Robert.

I like the feeling how it's going to break off at any time.

I do like this.

Lady, You always amaze me with your words. Another fantastic write flowing from your heart! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

TLB The first three lines drew me in. This is the place I remain Beautiful my friend. Electricblue