physiognomy

A beautiful piece giving a portrat of your vision, hold that to your heart, but try not to seek perfection it hurts. If you close your eyes do you see the same, I hope you do. Great to read, Yours, Ian.T

I love this piece of yours, and you know how much I appreciate the person you are describing here. Give him my regards, Ink

Well now... that is love there... and placed on the page very well... love this write... Richard

I want more. And I'm not saying by that that your piece is lacking. It's me who's lacking. An adroit use of verbs. Words of color, of action. Yes, even words/terms simple, straight, bold. I could paint with the color of your eyes and sleep on the shape of your lips Wow! ... and drown in your mind More wow! Who would seek (or even want) perfection(?) when intimately so near to someone with such body ... and so cake-frostinged by a singular mind? Thanx, Chuck

Hello my Proprietress! I'm so glad that in your, very short I hope, absence I've been going through your posts because for some weird reason I missed this little beauty!!! A flawless picture of spellbinding love... Every line drips with beauty. Sounds like you're verrrrry much in love with him which is the best feeling to have! : ) Hope to have you back soon! ~Stella

I would sew my eyes shut for they do not need another stitch my lips together for they have already tasted eternity. No proof can be better than these lines for one's fidelity. so passionate that one could envy your boyfriend.

I know what you mean. Kata well expressed. Ann

"and sleep on the shape of your lips" there is a poem, I wrote, where one line is "make a bed beneath your lips"...and I posted it this morning. this piece reminds me of myself in so many ways. :)

How would one otherwise be able to pronounce this vision of such potent portrayal than in poetry, we have at our fingertips the power to create visions no artist, or possibly no artist could do as well, we have a world of fantasy and imagination and you use it well dear Kata. I have commented before on this but then each time we come to the poetry we see and feel other things and this time it was so. I too love the "and sleep on the shape of your lips" and I defy anyone to be able to paint that exact FEELING and convey the same, perhaps photography but that would be cheating. Love again to you dear kata from Ann of Norway.