Weirdelf

Wonderful friend
Eager to help others, a heart of gold, so
Involved, wanting the best for neopoet. A
Ray of sunshine, a cool breeze
Dancing on proud moonbeams, with

Enthusiasm he staggers in dismay
Looking to make a difference, still a true
Friend although brusque

— Barbara Writes, Dec 13, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

Critiques

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Barbara

I do so agree! Hope Jess sees it soon! Thank you for this tribute to him, ID

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

ID

I hope he likes it, He is a good with a big heart, deserving of appreciation. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

RSScheerer

17 years 5 months ago

Nicely worded, Barbara

Everyone needs reminded how much they are loved. I hope this helps Jess realize just that. ~ Ronda

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

Rhonda

I agree, everybody needs to hear that they are appreciated and loved by their friends. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

xDARKxPURPLEx

Thanks, I am glad you like it. he is deserving of a tribute. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

paparazii

17 years 5 months ago

IT HURTS NOT TO SEE HIS COMMENT HERE!

I agree with all of u guys, he's weird in a wonderfull way, very active and i like to pick and pock him too much when on the chat room, i should also dedicate a poem to him, hopefully his wife if he has one, is more than crazy about him. lots of laugh guys and lots of love cheers-- paparazii

weirdelf

17 years 5 months ago

How did I miss this?

A superb poem that reaches the ineffable heights of poetic truth! [wicked chuckle]. Thank you Barbara, it is wonderful hear and be appreciated. Cool acrostic too. I can't help myself- Involve Involved moonbeam moonbeams ? his Enthusiasm staggers in dismay ? sounds like my ethusiasm is staggering, perhaps his Enthusiasm staggers me in dismay love the brusque ending. cheers, Jess

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

Jess

Thanks for fine tuning it for me. I made the changes. Glad you like it. Thanks for correcting the grammar its been a while for me in English. Respectfully Yours, Barbara