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Off the Hook !

Our children are off the hook !
Exactly, what direction are they going ?
Some of them put me sooo at ease,
until I see what the others are showing.

I believe there's good in everyone
and that helps keep me from feeling, "sad";
the problem that I'm having now,
is that percentage of them that is bad !

And I am not being judgemental,
I wouldn't do that in my wildest dreams;
but with drive-byes, gang murders, and robberies,
our kids are off the hook, so it seems.

Which brings me back to my reason for writing,
my one, major dire concern.
Our good kids won't have much of a future,
if we never teach them something worthwhile to learn.
— docmaverick, Dec 12, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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YOBEEPS

17 years 5 months ago

your friend

I really like this one doc. off the hook you get a a+ good job
Debra Bryant

Debra Bryant

17 years 5 months ago

Off The Hook!

I have often felt the same way...but then our parents and grand parents probably felt the same way to. (LOL) Well written, I liked it. Debbie
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

nice poem

Young people have a lot to learn and a mind of their own so its hard to get through. your poem shares a special message. Respectfully Yours, Barbara