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Dec 11, 2008
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A Touch of Heavy
Sometimes my head seems much too heavy for me to carry.
The overload of wishing and humming those songs that rip you open,
are most times a moment to lengthy to bare.
Indulgence.
Not a viable solution these days.
My shoulders are aged and slumped and I can’t move the weight much longer.
I don’t want to push and shove it no more. I don’t want to shift and replace it again.
Don’t want to excuse or power paint it. Can’t do the “Maybe, it was meant to be,” one more time.
There are only so many sidewalks to leave a shadow on. Only a few choice uncovered corners ,
still detached and forlorn enough to offer a breather.
And I do so need a breather.
There has to a bag or suitcase, some kind of tote, waiting full to bustin’ with my answers. But I don’t see a place wide enough for it to hide. And if that’s the case, then the answer I seek is that I have no answers.
And that needs no sack to lie in.
By: K. Mulroney
The overload of wishing and humming those songs that rip you open,
are most times a moment to lengthy to bare.
Indulgence.
Not a viable solution these days.
My shoulders are aged and slumped and I can’t move the weight much longer.
I don’t want to push and shove it no more. I don’t want to shift and replace it again.
Don’t want to excuse or power paint it. Can’t do the “Maybe, it was meant to be,” one more time.
There are only so many sidewalks to leave a shadow on. Only a few choice uncovered corners ,
still detached and forlorn enough to offer a breather.
And I do so need a breather.
There has to a bag or suitcase, some kind of tote, waiting full to bustin’ with my answers. But I don’t see a place wide enough for it to hide. And if that’s the case, then the answer I seek is that I have no answers.
And that needs no sack to lie in.
By: K. Mulroney
— Rottiestyl, Dec 11, 2008
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themoonman
17 years 5 months ago
Rottiestyl...
Rottiestyl
17 years 5 months ago
This property Is Protected
Arrow
17 years 5 months ago
This is one weary poem-
Rottiestyl
17 years 5 months ago
I tend to just write. I pay
Arrow
17 years 5 months ago
My internal teacher never puts the red pen away.