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Demons Conquered
in the depths of the valley
where you stand all alone
the angels are there to rally
you are not on your own.
between the drops of tears
your demons do dance
to the rhythm of your fears
they will take their chance.
you say the fight is within
but see who's around
look back where you've been
angels have covered the ground.
the mirror's reflection
is the demons you see
its only a collection
of what you don't want to be.
listen to the singing,
battle crys can be heard
the angels are gathering
and all have conferred
your demons may seem ready
but they really have no clue
your angels will fight steady
they are not giving up on you.
the battle may be long and bloody
with casualties on both sides
all will be tired and muddy
but the angels will take the strides.
the demons will finally retreat
with their tails tightly between their thighs
they will be humiliated by defeat
on the breeze you can hear their sighs
when the duel is over and the dust settles,
the valley will be peaceful once more
there will be sunbeams on the petals
i'll be there holding open the door.
Written by Tink 12/10/08
Critiques
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
What do you think about
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Tink
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks Patty
Mason King
17 years 6 months ago
Nice Poem Tink, how about
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
Mason,
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Gotcha a title I think
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks Rett,
Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
Awesome, Tink!
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
Thanks Lonnie
Arrow
17 years 6 months ago
Title--
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
You´ve found your title!
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
ID,
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Tink,
Linda Moses
17 years 5 months ago
Tink
Tink
17 years 5 months ago
thank you linda
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
You have responded well to feedback here,