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Dec 11, 2008
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we all die like thieves
watch someone
in the act of not telling
weighing a secret much
like a woman with eggs
in a market deciding what money is left.
there is a part of any person
practicing how to leave itself
amputating.
leaving behind obvious trails
curling towards the bone
with that,
the rest makes sense
and why those words still bleed dark.
in the act of not telling
weighing a secret much
like a woman with eggs
in a market deciding what money is left.
there is a part of any person
practicing how to leave itself
amputating.
leaving behind obvious trails
curling towards the bone
with that,
the rest makes sense
and why those words still bleed dark.
— whitetea, Dec 11, 2008
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Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
Excellent Write, Whitetea!
Quillsvein1
17 years 5 months ago
this
doorman
16 years 3 months ago
Happy I stumbled upon this