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Michael

Michael

Though Michael was a gentle soul
He would stand and fight,
For Michael always knew his mind
And stood for what was right.

Michael loved the football games
And could have been a star,
But did so many other things
He would've been stretched too far.

In School he watched every game
While playing in the band,
Marching with precision,
His trumpet in his hand.

As a medic he went to war,
There was no braver man,
Dodging bullets to lend aid
Michael made his stand.

Though Michael was a gentle soul
Some could never understand,
When called upon for mercy,
He never stayed his hand.

I was there with him
When Michael met his end,
It matters not how it came,
I lost my best friend.

A misty figure stood over him
And looked across the land,
A sword hanging at his side
And a trumpet in his hand.

As I stood there watching
I thought of many things,
Then stared in awe at the sight
When Michael spread his wings.

From a dream, I wrote this two weeks before Michael died of wounds. There are a few here that will understand the term mercy in the context used.

— Rett, Dec 10, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you Barbara

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Wow, Rett

That is definitely one powerful piece there. Really nice tribute. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Does Rudolph fail the safety inspection if his nose is burnt out? And where does he go? I don't think he'd fit in the bay at the Jiffy Lube." Happy holidays, y'all!
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you m'am.

Michael never got to see it. This was one of those dreams that foretold a death. *sigh* I still miss him at times. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
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Tink

17 years 6 months ago

wow rett

wonderful tribute rett! awesome Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you tink

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

It's Freaking Snowing Here!

This is rediculous. Second time in 3 years. It doesn't snow except once every 8-10 years here! Global warming my redneck butt! It hasn't done that since the late 50's early 60's! Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Michael

Such a beautiful tribute here Rett, Thought the ending to be perfect! Line 8 seems a bit forced, but this might be just me? Also line 20, might be me,didn't think the wording quite right? _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks janice

Right you are on 8, but 20 is correct in what I am saying. He never stayed his hand means, he never refused to give mercy when asked.( mercy for those in too much pain or too injured to survive long means granting death.) I appreciate your reading, critiquing and your nice comments. Thank you so very much my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
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Michael Landau

17 years 6 months ago

A very moving poem!

This is a very moving poem. I like the rhyme and and the rhythm very much. I thought the poem contained an allusion to Michael the archangel, but I wasn't sure so I thought I would ask. Is that the case? Sincerely, Michael
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks Michael, and yes

Right at the end I am alluding to the Archangel Michael. Good catch sir! Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it a lot. I thought it was a fitting allusion to my friend. He really was a gentle soul, but able to be tough when called on. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Michael

Rett, Thank you for pointing that out to me.[line 20] I am not too old to learn, right? Enjoyable, and heart-felt Rett! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you Janice

None of us are too old to learn. When I stop learning, just shovel dirt over me because I'll soon start smelling. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 6 months ago

Rett

Wow. this is a moving poem, and thanks for explaining "Stay his hand" I wasn't quite sure. I love the last line. very well written. We are getting a lot of poems from dreams.
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you Linda

I write a lot from dreams and just about anything. Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Janice

Yep, I alluded to the Archangel Michael toward the end. I thought it fit well as a tribute to my friend. Yep, it snowed last night. Gone this morning though. One thing about Texas, if you don't like the weather, wait a few minutes and it changes. Supposed to be in the 70's by the weekend and then another cold front Tuesday. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Rett

Great poem my friend. And you dreamed it beforehand. I am kinda psychic to, better with age. Shh people with think i am psycho.I know a Michael that has wings and fought a fierce battle. He is my favorite angel. Nice tribute. Another good write my friend Patty
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

My mother was strongly Psychic

Mine is rare and a bit erratic. I guess that makes me psycho. *LOL* The allusion in my poem was about Archangel Michael and my friend Michael. Thank you very much my friend. I appreciate it! Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
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Wafi

17 years 5 months ago

Dreams

Rett I felt sorry and you must be too, when your dream came true! How we wish for our dreams to change into reality but some dreams really pain. A nice and touching piece. Wafi
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Wafi, thank you very much sir

And yes, I still miss Michael. Some people wish dreams to foretell the future, but I don't. My mother hated it and on the very rare occasion I have one of those, I hate it also because they always foretell something bad. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Michael...

What a good friend you are! never stayed his hand... this line says more than most could ever think about doing... but in the name of mercy some have to make those decisions.... I like Michael... and the poem! Richard
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you Richard

He was a good friend, especially for a guy that weighed 130 pounds soaking wet back then. *S* He was what people call a "gentle giant", but he could be tough as nails when he had to be. He was one of those rare people that could do almost anything well, but wasn't conceited about it. Glad you liked it. You would have liked him. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Debra Bryant

Debra Bryant

17 years 5 months ago

Rett

I loved your tribute to your friend and also the felt the allusion to Michael the Archangel while I was reading it. Your poetry inspires me. Sincerely; Debbie
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Debra, thank you very much

Nothing is more heartwarming than to know you inspired someone. I am very gratified that you liked this piece and understood the allusion of Michael to Michael the Archangel. I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks Double D

I am truly glad you enjoyed this write about my friend. Times of war can bring many acts not normally done both good and bad and sometimes mercy is the best thing to do for someone. Somehow I was waiting for the Paw! *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "The people of America must really like idiots, look at EVERYONE in Washington." Rett