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A Dragons tale
Connor the baby dragon
Went to see the queen
He knocked upon the palace door
Insisting he was seen
The courtiers and the equerries
On seeing the little tyke
Told him to be off at once
His kind they did not like
They ushered him outside the gates
And told him "go away"
Said that he should leave at once
For here he could not stay
He begged of them, he pleaded
To allow him to have entry
The palace staff were adamant
"Now clear off" said the sentry
Not one to give up easily
He tried another tack
Walked around the corner
And sneaked in round the back
He wandered through the corridors
The Staterooms and the halls
Until he found the largest room
Where the Queen holds all her Balls
He gazed at all the splendour
Mouth agape in awe
Till something made him jump
And guess what Connor saw
The person that he’d come to see
Was sitting at the table
The object of his visit
Her Majesty, Queen Mabel
“Your Majesty“, he mumbled
“It’s you I’ve come to see”
Then remembering his manners
Dropped down on one knee
“Get up, dear boy” the Queen replied
“Come here and sit by me
Tell me why you’ve come here,
Sit down and have some tea”
Connor told her of his travels
From his home so far away
How he was an orphan
And how he’d like to stay
The Queen, touched by his story
Summoned each and everyone
And let the people know
Exactly what she’d done
“This dragon” said the Queen
“Is going to be my mascot
He’ll accompany me tomorrow
When I go to Royal Ascot”
From that day forth our Connor
Was at the good Queens side
When walking in the garden
Or going for a ride
The pair were both inseperable
Never would they part
Though Connor was just a dragon
He'd won the monarchs heart
Critiques
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Shazbat,
shazbat
17 years 6 months ago
Robert, I’ve only been
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
nice work
shazbat
17 years 6 months ago
Thats very kind of you. when
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
John
shazbat
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks Jess, it just goes to
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Hi John,
shazbat
17 years 5 months ago
Robert, thanks for your idea
Debra Bryant
17 years 5 months ago
A Dragon's Tale
shazbat
17 years 5 months ago
Debra, you are too kind, I
Vulgar Peregrine
17 years 5 months ago
Nice work! Great voice -
shazbat
17 years 5 months ago
VP, I have to admit to my
Nature Mithya
17 years 5 months ago
Amazing story....
shazbat
17 years 5 months ago
Thank you for your extremely
Vulgar Peregrine
17 years 5 months ago
Just read your chocolate