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A Dragons tale

Connor the baby dragon

Went to see the queen

He knocked upon the palace door

Insisting he was seen
 

The courtiers and the equerries

On seeing the little tyke

Told him to be off at once

His kind they did not like
 

They ushered him outside the gates

And told him  "go away"

Said that he should leave at once

For here he could not stay
 

He begged of them, he pleaded

To allow him to have entry

The palace staff were adamant

"Now clear off" said the sentry
 

Not one to give up easily

He tried another tack

Walked around the corner

And sneaked in round the back
 

He wandered through the corridors

The Staterooms and the halls

Until he found the largest room

Where the Queen holds all her Balls
 

He gazed at all the splendour

Mouth agape in awe

Till something made him jump

And guess what Connor saw

 

The person that he’d come to see

Was sitting at the table

The object of his visit

Her Majesty, Queen Mabel
 

“Your Majesty“, he mumbled

“It’s you I’ve come to see”

Then remembering his manners

Dropped down on one knee
 

“Get up, dear boy” the Queen replied

“Come here and sit by me

Tell me why you’ve come here,

Sit down and have some tea”
 

Connor told her of his travels

From his home so far away

How he was an orphan

And how he’d like to stay
 

The Queen, touched by his story

Summoned each and everyone

And let the people know

Exactly what she’d done
 

“This dragon” said the Queen

“Is going to be my mascot

He’ll accompany me tomorrow

When I go to Royal Ascot”
 

From that day forth our Connor

Was at the good Queens side

When walking in the garden 

Or going for a ride 


The pair were both inseperable

Never would they part

Though Connor was just a dragon

He'd won the monarchs heart
 








 

— shazbat, Dec 10, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Hi Shazbat,

I knew security was poor at the palace, but I didn't realize it was this bad! Again, this is asking to be illustrated, perhaps with a cartoon of the Queen having tea with the baby dragon or of her taking it to Ascot (both of them wearing large hats). This is great fun with a good rhythm, as usual. Best wishes, Robert.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 6 months ago

Robert, I’ve only been

Robert, I've only been writing since August and I have found that I enjoy writing this sort of nonsense, perhaps finding an illustrator could result in a kiddies book or two. Thanks for your positive comments they are very much appreciated Regards John ps: I worked at Buckingham Palace many years ago and, trust me, security was bloody good back then,
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

nice work

i would like to write like this nonsense for kids. one day it may just come to me and be a good write. i have many make believe in my head but have not find my way to write it yet. great job here. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 6 months ago

Thats very kind of you. when

Thats very kind of you. when my children were small I would often make up stories to tell them at bedtime, perhaps I should have saved them. Thanks for the comment. Regards John
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

John

The one thing this isn't is nonsense! I think kids would really enjoy this. Aww, who am I kidding... I enjoyed it too! :~D ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Does Rudolph fail the safety inspection if his nose is burnt out? And where does he go? I don't think he'd fit in the bay at the Jiffy Lube." Happy holidays, y'all!
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Hi John,

On a second reading of this poem I had a doubt about the expression 'sling yer 'ook' because although I can guess the meaning from the context I don't know if a child would be able to do so. Best wishes.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 5 months ago

Debra, you are too kind, I

Debra, you are too kind, I would dearly love to be in a position where i could do just that. Who knows what the future may hold Regards John
VP

Vulgar Peregrine

17 years 5 months ago

Nice work! Great voice -

Nice work! Great voice - imaginative, fresh, and steady all the way through - no srains or forces and winds up very well - tho I kind of liked your earlier ending twist - the king thing - perhaps you could somehow reconcile that with the current ending? ...stack them? ...or maybe not - the king ending does wrench the tone... But something else bothers me - I believe you've almost got a classic here but my gut tells me there's a piece missing - a heavy piece that needs to be put down very gently to tie the front door, the back door and the queen's approval together - I'm sure Joseph Campbell could have told you what that would be - I'm don't think I've seen you go there but perhaps you should for this one - Please keep working on this. VP
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 5 months ago

VP, I have to admit to my

VP, I have to admit to my ignorance, until today i had never heard of Joseph Campbell, I googled him today and have read a little of his work and also something of his life, I shall have to get a book or two and read some more. I have taken on board your comments re; the back and front door etc, and will certainly see if it can be done. Thank you very much for your comments and suggestions they are very much appreciated. Regards John
NM

Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Amazing story....

.... relate a dragon to a queen. Imagination worked into real life. Congrats you are a real story teller Like a young boy I sucked in the lines in pure and simple joy.
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 5 months ago

Thank you for your extremely

Thank you for your extremely kind comments, it is always good to know that you have brightened someones day. Regards John
VP

Vulgar Peregrine

17 years 5 months ago

Just read your chocolate

Just read your chocolate poem - liked it - here's what I think: Most of your work appears to me as a collection of extended limeriks - clean, direct and with an unexpected kicker at the end - very good stuff as it stands - very enjoyable - you have a talent. But when you changed endings on this dragon piece - changed the sharp "limerick" king kicker for the softer, warmer "queen" resolution you raised the bar quite a bit for yourself - you made a limerick into a story - and it appears to me that this one is a very good story looking for a theme - something to tie the three parts together a bit more and emerge at the end as a message. Am I being too heavy here? I'm not sure. I guess it comes down to why did you change the final stanza? Is your work evolving? I guess that's up to you to you to figure out. VP