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Dec 09, 2008
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Where I've Been
Where I've Been
Ten miles out of Jackson town
Just going nowhere fast
Was walking down the highway
Alone and busted flat
Lady kindly stopped her car
Said I looked allright
And she was kind of lonely
Would I share her room tonight.
Thumbed on over to Natchez
Slept down by the bluff
On the seedy side of town
Where things get kind of rough
Woke up with my money gone
But I still had my head
Thanking God for what I had
I could have woke up dead
Sitting in a small café
Near the town of Kenner
Hadn't eaten in three days
Was feeling somewhat thinner
Waitress bought me a burger
And topped it off with fries
Then offered me some loving
If I would tell her lies
Cleaning up a place one night
Stepped out to get some air
I woke up in a dumpster
And blood was everywhere
Struggling to my knees
Somehow I got out
Staggered to the dim lit street
A cop then heard my shout
Then made my way to Houston
I helped a trucker load
Twenty dollars and a meal
Again I hit the road
I don't know where I'm heading
But I know where I've been
I would fight with Satan himself
Than go back home again
Ten miles out of Jackson town
Just going nowhere fast
Was walking down the highway
Alone and busted flat
Lady kindly stopped her car
Said I looked allright
And she was kind of lonely
Would I share her room tonight.
Thumbed on over to Natchez
Slept down by the bluff
On the seedy side of town
Where things get kind of rough
Woke up with my money gone
But I still had my head
Thanking God for what I had
I could have woke up dead
Sitting in a small café
Near the town of Kenner
Hadn't eaten in three days
Was feeling somewhat thinner
Waitress bought me a burger
And topped it off with fries
Then offered me some loving
If I would tell her lies
Cleaning up a place one night
Stepped out to get some air
I woke up in a dumpster
And blood was everywhere
Struggling to my knees
Somehow I got out
Staggered to the dim lit street
A cop then heard my shout
Then made my way to Houston
I helped a trucker load
Twenty dollars and a meal
Again I hit the road
I don't know where I'm heading
But I know where I've been
I would fight with Satan himself
Than go back home again
— Rett, Dec 09, 2008
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Critiques
RSScheerer
17 years 6 months ago
Nicely done, Rett
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks Ronda
Mason King
17 years 6 months ago
A seriously cool and
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks Mason
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
hi
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you zarul
Linda Moses
17 years 6 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks linda
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks Barbara
Nature Mithya
17 years 6 months ago
lol rett... how many times have I told you ....
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Ah Nature
Nature Mithya
17 years 6 months ago
Lol
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you Janice
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Nice! kind of reminds me of
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Katie
Janice Pearce
17 years 2 months ago
Where I've Been
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Janice