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Dec 09, 2008
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Prayer
fighting magenta waves
of solar flare turning
my eyes radioactive green
flicker of serpents tongue
teasing denim blue mass
peeling back the layers
fluffing the soft curl as
our static moves the stale air
I watch the rise and drown
in the fall of all we are
of solar flare turning
my eyes radioactive green
flicker of serpents tongue
teasing denim blue mass
peeling back the layers
fluffing the soft curl as
our static moves the stale air
I watch the rise and drown
in the fall of all we are
— theladyblue, Dec 09, 2008
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
The way you play with the colours
theladyblue
17 years 6 months ago
ID
Stella
17 years 6 months ago
hi there Don’t know if my
theladyblue
17 years 6 months ago
ummm...well...
Jo Latimer
17 years 6 months ago
Interesting mingling...
theladyblue
17 years 6 months ago
i bet you would lol
orgami
17 years 5 months ago
just me
theladyblue
17 years 5 months ago
*bows*