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theladyblue
theladyblue
Dec 07, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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Cigarettes and sexuality
Dominance found
Bodies beyond minds
Dangling diminished
Reflections of desire
Delicious existence

— theladyblue, Dec 07, 2008

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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

sensual flow

I love this poem "Delicious existance" my fave line
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

ironically...

it is a direct reflection of my fav line... Cigarettes and sexuality... go figure! thanks so much! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 7 months ago

Cigarettes and sexuality is

Cigarettes and sexuality is a fucking great line, fucked if I know why, but it resonates. The rest carries it in a series of oppositions? I don't know how it works, but it works, deliciously, sensually cheers, Jess "They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin, wonder what he would think of the Patriot Act.
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

and...

that's why i love you!!! lol same page, Elffy baby...same page! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

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