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Was it for Nothing
Purple haze, broken by the
psychedelic colors of Sunshine,
dancing four ways to Sunday,
Crashing guitar of Jimmy Hendricks,
pumping sound of Iron butterfly,
is it “In-I-gada-the-vida” or
“In the garden of Eden”,
Running in and out of poetry readings
around the east village,
Awareness of war and fighting the
powers that be, marching and sit ins
a Columbia University,
The changes we fought for,
did we know it would be like this,
so many headaches and so few solutions,
Where is my America?
The one I grew up with?
I just can’t believe that all we said
and all we did,
Was it for Nothing?
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(Stanza one has three hallucinogenic
drugs of the 60’s which I had taken,
Purple Haze, Sunshine, and fourway.)
Critiques
Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
Was it for Null
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Janice,
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Eduardo,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Robert,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Jess,
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
Today it´s the drugs without the protests
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
ID,
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Rett,
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
My sweet Patty,
Barbara Writes
17 years 5 months ago
Nice write