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Compendium

His partner isn't simply what she seems:
he sees her through a mesh of memories.
She isn't just the woman she is now,
but a compendium of all she's been.

She's still that girl in light-blue jeans
(stunning, with her tan and long, dark hair)
who made his life seem suddenly worthwhile,
when they were students, crammed with dreams.

She is the mother of their children, too,
and though they're starting to leave home,
he remembers all the care she gave:
help with homework, food and clothes.

Or she's a forty-something lady on a beach,
who seems untroubled by the sun's harsh rays,
soaking up its warmth for hours on end,
while he must leave, in search of shade.

She could be likened to a Russian doll,
concealing all those other selves inside.
When one has known and loved someone so long,
there's much, much more to them than meets the eye.

— Robert Melliard, Dec 06, 2008

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About the Author

Region, Country: Asturias, Spain

Favorite Poets: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Du Bellay, Metaphysicals, Petrarch, Dante, Baudelaire, Lorca, Becquer, Coleridge

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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

Compendium Poem

BOB., This is a sensational poem to this woman. To still have a love like this, you are both lucky, in my eyes. Very nicely written.wcw
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Hi WCW,

Many thanks for your encouraging comments. I am indeed lucky to feel a long-term love for someone (on which this poem is based) although I sometimes wonder if the sentiment is mutual or just a one way flow. But anyway I believe that happiness is to be found more in loving than in being loved. Best wishes, Robert.
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Compendium

Loved this one! It reflects the changes in body, but not the true beauty, the soul~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Hi Janice,

Many thanks for your comment. This poem is really a description of my wife, who has remained remarkably firm in physical terms over the years, but her kindness to others is a quality that will almost certainly last longer. Both her firmness and her kindness seem to be inherited characteristics. Best wishes, Robert.