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Winter

What can be said of Winter,
oh, whispering pine?

What can be said of your blanket
of white, such a pristine silence
inside the advent of all my loneliness?

What can be said of Love?

I walk through a patch of light,
there
between the sacred circle
of evergreens,

the air is cold, my breath
forms vapor trails,
ascending, descending, dissipating,
refreshing the seasons
I let go

the meadow from where
the red fern grows
slumbers
and this is where the lion and the lamb
shall sleep tonight



— Kailashana, Dec 06, 2008

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yenti

yenti

17 years 6 months ago

Kailashana

Lovely write, that seems to reflect an image of longing, also there is a conflict of feelings, shall I, shant I. A blanket to hide under to await the spring, when the spring is now. I wrote something sometime it was "If you carry a cross to long it will become the reason for carrying" I await the Spring in your writing, Yours, Ian.T
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Winter

Beautiful images here I loved this one! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
JL

Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

Memories...

Anna, I haven't seen or been near snow in 8 years & am sitting in sweltering 37 degree (C) heat as I write, so believe me when I tell you this was like a cool, welcome breeze! Regards, Jo
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you all for reading,

Thank you all for reading, what *good* is poetry if no one reads it? Much like if a tree falls in a forest, will it make a sound? Hugs. ~A "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.