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Dec 06, 2008
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Winter
What can be said of Winter,
oh, whispering pine?
What can be said of your blanket
of white, such a pristine silence
inside the advent of all my loneliness?
What can be said of Love?
I walk through a patch of light,
there
between the sacred circle
of evergreens,
the air is cold, my breath
forms vapor trails,
ascending, descending, dissipating,
refreshing the seasons
I let go
the meadow from where
the red fern grows
slumbers
and this is where the lion and the lamb
shall sleep tonight
oh, whispering pine?
What can be said of your blanket
of white, such a pristine silence
inside the advent of all my loneliness?
What can be said of Love?
I walk through a patch of light,
there
between the sacred circle
of evergreens,
the air is cold, my breath
forms vapor trails,
ascending, descending, dissipating,
refreshing the seasons
I let go
the meadow from where
the red fern grows
slumbers
and this is where the lion and the lamb
shall sleep tonight
— Kailashana, Dec 06, 2008
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yenti
17 years 6 months ago
Kailashana
Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
Winter
Jo Latimer
17 years 6 months ago
Memories...
Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
Excellent write, Kailashana!
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you all for reading,