Barbara Writes

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Weird

Weird

Wind blown thoughts
Enter hearts with
Intriguing gifts of creativity
Ready to etch ideas and
Dreams into wondrous realities

— Barbara Writes, Dec 05, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

Critiques

akabeks

17 years 6 months ago

Do we say that these

Do we say that these thoughts may be angelic or diabolic! I was taught(in a religious class) that some of these thoughts are not good for the soul(mundane so to say).But the free thinkers thinks otherwise... sometimes i really don't understand.... if you permit me to rewrite this poem, i will say; "Wind blown thoughts Enter hearts with an intriguing gift of creativity Ready to etch Dreams and ideas into A wonderous reality". akabeks.

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Oooo!!

I'm telling you changed my sisters poem, your in big trouble!!! Eddie

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

He gets a break this time

I was looking for more to add to this. My thinker was off yesterday, but wrote and submit it anyway. i have been feeling weird theses days, more than usual. lol Respectfully Yours, Barbara

weirdelf

17 years 6 months ago

your strangeness works!

I also don't forgive the un-necessary rewrite cheers, Jess "They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin, wonder what he would think of the Patriot Act.

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Jess

Strangeness, glad I could turn it into a good thing lol. people that know me call me strange and weird some just stare in silence makes wonder what! sometime. glad you like them both. I just felt something was missing from the first write. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

thanks akabeks

i like you suggestion. I will consider it Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Ready to etch

ideas and dreams into wondrous realities and wondrous realities into heartfelt dreams. I am out of my mind, hopefully I can get back in it shortly. Beautiful write even if you are feeling weirder than normal. Always a pleasure to read your work. Respectfully, Rett: "For all you Scrooges who don't like Santa Claus or the true meaning of Christmas, BAH HUMBUG! For the rest of you, MERRY CHRISTMAS!" Rett

Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

Hi Barbara

Loved this gem of a poem. If the weirdness makes you write like this, might be an idea to encourage it! :) Regards, Jo

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

thanks Jo

sometimes i must write to come out of the weirdness. a struggle it is holding on to sanity. I wrote *barely living* today. still feeling weird, so i hope you read and see if you like it to. glad you think it is a gem. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

Linda Moses

17 years 6 months ago

Barbara

This is very creative and I do like it.

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

linda

thanks for reading. I am glad you like it. i was trying to be creative with this, so thanks for commenting on the creativity.. Respectfully Yours, Barbara

weirdelf

17 years 6 months ago

Barbara, this is a poem I wish I had writ

say no more cheers, Jess "They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin, wonder what he would think of the Patriot Act.

Ink Dragon

17 years 6 months ago

A fine acrostic

but I hesitate to rate it just yet, because I had the feeling that there was more to come?! I have just had a peek at the other comments and found that you yourself are looking for a way to finish it. If I may suggest something: How about going on with W O R D S Take it or leave it, just a thought. With all due respect, ID

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

thanks ink

It is finish. It is about being me or any poet feeling weird and my rewrite was what I needed to bring it to a finish. thanks for your vote I appreciate that. Your suggestion is appreciated, but will change the poem meaning. It is all about me coming out of an emotional block. Respectfully Yours, Barbara