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Dec 05, 2008
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An alternating current
He loves her morning bustle round their home:
her daily, dogged war on dirt and mess,
in which he lends a less committed hand.
But he hates her when she looks at him
disdainfully, because his clothes are shabby
or his shoes are getting old.
He loves her when she wriggles near at night:
he loves the warmth that flows between them,
through skin and flesh and bone.
But how he hates her when she turns away,
deliberately rejecting love - as if
her life was full of more important things.
He loves and hates and hates and loves her:
an alternating current is at work.
When hate's in charge, he simply waits
till love returns...
— Robert Melliard, Dec 05, 2008
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Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
An alternating current
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Janice,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
Robert
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Robert, I really like this