NEOPOET.COM ACROSTIC

NEW POET FRIENDS THAT I HAVE FOUND.
EVERY ONE HELPING PAVE NEW GROUND.
OUR MANY WORDS MAKE THE SOUND.
PEOPLE PASSING KNOWLEDGE AROUND.
ONE, THEN THE OTHER, WE SURROUND.
EVERY POEM SOMEHOW BECOME'S PROFOUND.
TALENT AND CARING WE HAVE IN ABOUND.
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CLEAR ARE OUR WORD'S THAT CAN CONFOUND.
OPEN THOUGHT'S AND WORDS PILE IN A MOUND.
MAY OUR POTENTIAL CONTINUE TO ASTOUND.

— DawningDaytripper, Dec 05, 2008

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

Critiques

zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI

THIs is your first acrostic, huh? lovely. have u tried double? it is harder. i have tried both of them. drop by my page and check out both types of acrostics. HUG ZARUL http://www.neopoet.com/node/15986

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Look at you...

a write expressing the exact amazement I feel about this place and its potential... and in perfect form too... glad you shared this one with us.... Richard

poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

I st acrostic

You did a very nice job on this one and a very nice tribute Chrys

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Good job on the acrostic Double D.

I started to call you D squared , but liked Double D better. *LMAO* Good job on the poem here. A couple of little teeny tiny suggestions. ONE, THAN THE OTHER, WE SURROUND. (than=then) OPEN THOUGHT’S AND WORDS PILE UP IN A MOUND.( delete UP for a better flow) I also love that everything ended in D. *LOL* Way to GO! Respectfully, Rett: "For all you Scrooges who don't like Santa Claus or the true meaning of Christmas, BAH HUMBUG! For the rest of you, MERRY CHRISTMAS!" Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

I know how that goes.

I sometimes will have something bouncing around in my head a week or more before it comes to fruition. It is irritating to the extreme to have a phrase that won't leave you alone till you can think of things to go with it. Respectfully, Rett: "For all you Scrooges who don't like Santa Claus or the true meaning of Christmas, BAH HUMBUG! For the rest of you, MERRY CHRISTMAS!" Rett

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

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Dawning Your Acrostic was very nice, and a fitting tribute also~ They are harder than they look! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

excellent first acrostic!

It's perfect, structurally correct, and good theme! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "Does Rudolph fail the safety inspection if his nose is burnt out? And where does he go? I don't think he'd fit in the bay at the Jiffy Lube." Happy holidays, y'all!

Ink Dragon

17 years 6 months ago

I enjoy acrostics

immensely, and I think you have had quite a good shot at it, as I understand it is your first one. Personally, I do not always attempt to make my acrostics rhyme_unnecessary double hardship. Would you do me the favour and delete the apostrophes, please? Assuming that you mean "words" and "thoughts" in the plural and "becomes" in the 3rd person singular, of course. As to your theme: I wholeheartedly agree! Poetic Regards, ID