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Dec 07, 2008
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Reflecting on mermaids
Celestial sound from crimson lips beneath soft tufts of wet hair
mother of pearl fins flash beneath rosy nipples
Webbed hands, so delicate, wave from the waves' crest
beckoning for him to dive in
A yearning is unleashed in the sailor's chest
or is it a little more south where something stirs?
Beware, oh sailor, of the longing in your loins
Possession of these ethereal bodies comes at a price
for who would willingly kiss a creature half woman half fish?
Mermaids dwell in the depths where the waters are cold
In the dark they sing their inaudible songs, they dance their invisible dance
They surface to provoke a storm, to capture some unsuspecting sailor
They sink their talons into his flesh and feast on him
Mermaids are not gorgeous but garish
mermaids are not graceful but gruesome
Avert your eyes, sailor
before you are sucked in
and spat out again
bone by bloody bone
mother of pearl fins flash beneath rosy nipples
Webbed hands, so delicate, wave from the waves' crest
beckoning for him to dive in
A yearning is unleashed in the sailor's chest
or is it a little more south where something stirs?
Beware, oh sailor, of the longing in your loins
Possession of these ethereal bodies comes at a price
for who would willingly kiss a creature half woman half fish?
Mermaids dwell in the depths where the waters are cold
In the dark they sing their inaudible songs, they dance their invisible dance
They surface to provoke a storm, to capture some unsuspecting sailor
They sink their talons into his flesh and feast on him
Mermaids are not gorgeous but garish
mermaids are not graceful but gruesome
Avert your eyes, sailor
before you are sucked in
and spat out again
bone by bloody bone
Comments
RSScheerer
17 years 5 months ago
Reflecting on mermaids
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
As always
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Hm
RSScheerer
17 years 5 months ago
I like it
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
I have just made the change
Nature Mithya
17 years 5 months ago
Firstly I would never want my mermaids to suffer cold
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Interesting
leonard daranjo
17 years 5 months ago
Creative Thinking
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
I have a restless mind
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
I like this a lot
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
hey
themoonman
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Ink Dragon...
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
You are soo right
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
deep waters...
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Did you have to say that?
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
I know...
RSScheerer
17 years 4 months ago
Trying to hold on to your alliteration
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Ronda, and you, Kata,
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
think I've found something...
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
It´s definitely a thought
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
I think I may have arrived
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Ok, all,
RSScheerer
17 years 4 months ago
*dies laughing*
Tam the Chanter
16 years 9 months ago
Fish
Ink Dragon
16 years 9 months ago
Ian,
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
wow just found this
Ink Dragon
16 years 9 months ago
Hi green eyes,
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
yet I never commented
Ink Dragon
16 years 4 months ago
Well, better late than never...
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
not sure
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
Sirens on the rocks
Ink Dragon
16 years 4 months ago
Jess, I guess we should ask O to write
kaligantsaros
16 years 4 months ago
Definetly a woman's take on mermaids..
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
I surrender!
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
Like the re-write muchly!
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
I assume
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
I think this cake is
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
See?
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
"bothered"? Ow. That is harsh
Ink Dragon
16 years 3 months ago
I suggest a "no apologies " rule, Jess