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- Just another Cigarette -
Piping hot coffee in a
beautiful cup, that has a
gold ring around its Lip,
matching saucer also with
a gold ring around its
border,
An ornate ashtray waiting
to be filled with death,
Dust to dust. Ashes to
Ashes, crosses my mind,
A brand new pack of
cigarettes, with the brand
name in bold appealing
letters, tightly wrapped in
cellophane to preserve its
freshness,
A gold ribbon waiting to be
unfurled, so as to release
the enemy who brings
pleasure, but also death
from within.
Cole Trane playing softly
on a CD, memories of a
dear friend come flooding
in,
Memories of all nighters
discussing poetry,
philosophy, culture and
politics,
Gone are the nights of
Blues club hoping on 125th,
of smoke filled room and
aged Cabernets,
Of summer's day playing
Chess in central park, and
Aunt Mae’s place to play
some spades,
I recall so many things, but
most of all the thing that
sticks, is the alcohol and
cigarettes,
The cancer and emphysema
did him in, slowly and most
assuredly.
The last words I remember
he said in the hospital.
while clinging to life on an
iron lung,
Please!
Just another cigarette
before I go.
Critiques
Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
Just another Cigarette
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Janice,
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Awesome Eddie!
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Rett,
deelilah
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
delilah,
Race_9togo
17 years 6 months ago
excellent
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
race,
yenti
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Ian,
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Smoking
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Robert, sorry man, I can't resist
Tink
17 years 6 months ago
sorry i couldn't resist...
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Tink
Robert Melliard
17 years 6 months ago
Donkey
Rett
17 years 6 months ago
Robert
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Robert,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
thank you!!
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Patty,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Jess,
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Hey Richard!!
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
to all,
Tink
17 years 6 months ago
Great one Eddie!
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Tink,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Janice,
Ink Dragon
17 years 6 months ago
From addict to addict
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Dragon,
Linda Moses
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Linda,
leonard daranjo
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie - Thank God I didn't miss this
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Leo,
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 6 months ago
JUST ANOTHER CIGARETTE
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Mo,
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 5 months ago
Eddie
Proprietress o…
17 years 5 months ago
I was a passionate smoker...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
Jeez 26,
Ink Dragon
17 years 5 months ago
Eddie,
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 5 months ago
ID,