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Dec 03, 2008
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The Rooms of Your Soul
Rooms of Your Soul
I’m walking around the rooms of your soul,
Places you live and love and work and play,
Finding unbroken spaces, rich, and whole,
Comfortable spots where I want to stay.
I move through your eyes into sharp-witted hope,
Stars that brighten until first light breaks day;
When darkness is over, then we can cope;
If tomorrow never comes, take today.
I turn into your mind, an open book,
Where there is no malice contained, or fear.
The shelves are full of truths for me to look
And consider that which I hold so dear.
I enter your heart where fire is burning;
An easy chair invites, cozy and warm.
I must stay; there will be no returning.
Your heart’s safe haven though there be hard storm.
I run in the fields of your soul where
Landscapes smell of rain and alfalfa hay;
And gutsy winds blow gentle freedom there;
Sea grass meets sand and waves at sun’s last ray.
I’m walking around the rooms of your soul,
Places you live and love and work and play,
Finding unbroken spaces, rich, and whole,
Comfortable spots where I want to stay.
I move through your eyes into sharp-witted hope,
Stars that brighten until first light breaks day;
When darkness is over, then we can cope;
If tomorrow never comes, take today.
I turn into your mind, an open book,
Where there is no malice contained, or fear.
The shelves are full of truths for me to look
And consider that which I hold so dear.
I enter your heart where fire is burning;
An easy chair invites, cozy and warm.
I must stay; there will be no returning.
Your heart’s safe haven though there be hard storm.
I run in the fields of your soul where
Landscapes smell of rain and alfalfa hay;
And gutsy winds blow gentle freedom there;
Sea grass meets sand and waves at sun’s last ray.
— deelilah, Dec 03, 2008
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Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
The Rooms of Your Soul
deelilah
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you Janice
Race_9togo
17 years 6 months ago
This is good
deelilah
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you Jim
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Dee
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Well then...
deelilah
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you Patty and Richard
leonard daranjo
17 years 6 months ago
Deelilah - You have painted some beautiful pictures here
deelilah
17 years 5 months ago
Thank you Patty and Richard
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
I second that
orgami
17 years 5 months ago
remember then
deelilah
17 years 5 months ago
Orgami
orgami
17 years 5 months ago
soul settled
deelilah
17 years 5 months ago
27 years
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Soory to be so late
deelilah
17 years 5 months ago
Hi Rett
Rett
17 years 5 months ago
Sorry about taking so long