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GOD BLESS AMERICA. (USA)

GOD BLESS AMERICA! (USA)
She is America,
A specimen of limitless beautyInterlocking diversity, united is the statesAn abode, given to God for ownA realm freedom makes homeThe model heaven replicates hereA near perfection, yet a standardAn ideal template to civilizationBrightest star amongst manyCanopy where compassion is native Selfless in service, all benefitDefender of universal justiceA fair police evil dreadAn enemy, many misunderstandYet the good, wants a piece of her America, an empire all-pervading God bless America!Your kindness, will never be a fault A giver, never with a grudge God bless America!Hope of the oppressedYour blood, a sacrifice to universal peaceGod bless you AmericaGreatest land of noble HeroesWith warriors of universal appealBravely wired, with liberation skill America God bless your sacrificesHumanity hails you and applaudsHeavens true embassy for realEven beast as Eagle Like others, support your resolveSincerely, this for you, my medalMy gratitude so measurelessYes! I admire you For am your fan for life.    Beaming and flaunting 50Your territories is marked GoldenA beautiful bride,All glimpses you attractJust a piece of you,Many memories perpetually treasureDisembarking the wings of hopeYour change is ushered Welcome to new horizonA dawn of impeccable excellenceContinue as always, Heal and change the worldAll’s allegiance will not be corruptedOnce again, a new America is born againTo nurture ,nourish ,pollinate And entrench the dream Yes! He had a dreamA dream! , a dream!The American DreamA dream of changeGod bless AmericaAmerica blesses God. Author: Felix Joseph Osaeghemede      ([email protected])+2348037825027.Written:8-10-2008 ;11-45pm-12-25am. “The world needs to appreciate a country that is selflessly committed to global peace”Felix.o.Joseph.  A SPECIAL DEDICATION TO THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA., ON HER ELECTION.          
— chumfin, Dec 03, 2008

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

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Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Felix

I am sitting here with tears reading this. So many people here in America and abroad down our country because they do not understand. Maybe because we have had success, I don't know. But it is so nice to hear someone from another country that understands. We have our faults, but we strive to be the best we can be. If more people like you would speak up it would go a long way. What other country in the world aids more people whether friend of enemy than us? Yet we are called arrogant, controlling, damaging. We make mistakes, sure, who doesn't, but we try to do the best we can. We are a people that doesn't like to fight and will do our best to avoid one, but fight we will if we have to. From the bottom of my heart I thank you for this. May God, by whatever name you recognize Him or however you believe, bless you, your family and country. Respectfully, Rett: "If law abiding citizens are denied guns, the police don't need theirs. After all, the criminals aren't feared, just the law abiding citizens." Rett
chumfin

chumfin

17 years 6 months ago

thank you !

thank you very much , i felt it the way you did too. i love my country with the same passion ilove yours. i had to say my mind about a true global peacemaker GOd the father of Jesus will bless you also . thank you, and i strongly appreciacte youR emotions for your country, by whatevetr means you can send THE POEM all over and across. i want to tell the world BY THIS MEANS that she is GRREAT and pwerful. thanky you again. read the poem i wrote on my co0untry, NIGERIA! CHECK IT OUT THANK YOU FELIX. MY GOD BLESS YOU IN JESUS NAME.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Felix,

you are a greater American then some we have here. you see i have travel the world and looked at America from the outside as you I have, and what I have seen is beyond anything you see in the states. I have seen American working themselves to the bone to help bring freedom to other countries, and I'm not talking about soldiers. I'm talking about the average Joe we see in the street here in the states. I'm very impressed with your write and the fact that you elude to one of Americas greatest supporter of peace, and heroes. Dr. Martin Luther King. It is something so Beautiful to see the dream of a man with vision come true. So I guess you can say that we have reach the mount top!! For me this write is a five. God bless you and my you prosper in all you do! thanks, Eddie (this poem was brought to my attention by my good friend Rett, a true American)
chumfin

chumfin

17 years 6 months ago

my dear sir , i respectfully

my dear sir , i respectfully thank you kind words for this poem to ourn beautiful country. i may not be American by badge, but in my heart am one. it is good to appreciate a big kind brother. yes am Nigerian, any soul that has benefited from her kindness is an American. you have my permission to pass this poem to even white house, iraq orany one or where. may you all the fulfilment in you country GOD BLESS YOU FOR THE BLESSING YOU GAVE LONG LIVE THE USA. FELIX MY BEST AND KINDN REGARDS TO YOUR FRIEND.Rett. thanks bro.
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Felix

This country needs people like you to speak, folks who recognize and truly understand just how unique the USA really is, and how vital it is to the future of our world. :D awesome poem Jim
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Tink

17 years 6 months ago

wow felix

All I can say in response is THANK YOU. What a beautifully written tribute to "our" country. Although times are tough here for many, America is and will remain one of the best places to be. And for you, as a person living elsewhere, to capture the essence of what this country stands for is so touching to me. I will share this, at your request and for me as a tribute to you. You are an incredible author. Thank you again, my friend. Thank you. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Felix

This is a nice tribute to America..... I love the country and your poem. I am very happy with the election. Most of us do care about other countries, we do not want war, and help the church to sponsor people to help them farm, buy chickens, pigs. I know some may seem selfish with their fancy cars and houses, but among my group of people in the church, we do care and believe when Jesus comes back everything that was taken from the poor will be restored. I am very grateful for all I have not much, but I share. sincerely, Patty
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Felix

You've described our home as if you had seen it first hand. Eddie is right - you're more patriotic than some of our own citizens. I admit that times I'm fed up with and disgruntled with our country, and then I think about what it could be like instead. Beautiful poem. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If the opposite of 'pro' is 'con' would that make the opposite of 'progress' Congress? Just wonderin'....."
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 6 months ago

Felix

What a wonderful write abut the USA. I want to thank you for posting this. While we are not perfect, there are many Americans who do care about their country, and care about the suffering in other parts of the world. God bless you Felix. Sincerely, Linda
chumfin

chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

i thank you all!!!

i thank you for the great and passionate comments you made on my poem, i love the sacrifices your country has made all over the world, i dont mind critics, yes! America is greatest. best regards chumfin