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Future Memories

There are memories I have of people
that float up from the past,
the same way that water turns into ice.
The memory of their essence is there,

running and floating through the fingers of my mind;
and suddenly,the way a scent can trigger a recollection,
it hardens into a concrete thought;
reminding me of a memory that once was.

The memory of friends is like that, to me.
A scent, a color, a phrase, or even a situation
can turn the fluid of my past,
into the ice that is the hardened reality of the present,

and then I remember.
Now, you're going away my friend, to brave a new world
and I can tell in advance that I will miss you,
and that you will surface in my mind and haunt me.

And that will happen because of how special you are.
I welcome those future memories;
but for now, I must say farewell,
and hope that you will remember me, as well.

At least we'll always have the sky to share,
and every time I see the moon,
I will see your smile.
So, farewell my friend.....for now.

— docmaverick, Dec 02, 2008

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Future Memories

Doc, I loved the way you described how people are remembered by you. Hope your friend stays safe, till you meet again~ My favorite: At least we'll always have the sky to share _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 6 months ago

Your comment...

....touched me almost as much as my friend has touched my life. You too are in that rare category, that urges me to believe in people. Thank you for your insight. My warmest regards, #{:>{)+ doc.