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Dunelands Revisited

when winter reigns
across the snow-bound dunes
I stand upon a crest of sand
amid tall winter-sleeping pines
where sweet silence is supreme
and gaze across a frozen inland sea
to a tall and distant city,
Chicago, rising vast and shining
from gleaming ice made crimson
by sinking winter sun.

When summer reigns
this place is deep with people
stained by humid heat
forest thick with thoughtless noise,
beaches flecked with garbage
dunes strewn with endless footsteps
water filled with rafts of bodies
a place I seldom go.

now winter reigns
the cold has come once more
to drive the seething crowds away
welcome silence falls again
on slumbering woods
winter storm has swept away all evidence
of once pervasive human presence
and I am content, returned
to gaze upon the distant city
in the frozen precious quiet
of winter dunes revisited.
— Race_9togo, Dec 02, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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JL

Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

Also very good

Enjoyed this as well. I am also a fan of this kind of contemplation - definitely tends to get the creative juices flowing! Loved the stark, almost magical imagery of the 1st & 3rd verses with the sticky humanity sandwiched in-between. Very effective. Regards, Jo
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

Jo

I didn't really know if it worked, so I'm glad you confirmed that it does Jim "An armed populace is the last defense against tyrannical government."
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 6 months ago

Winter shores

This poem reminded me of walks along beaches in winter with my dog (in summer dogs aren't allowed) which I enjoyed more than going to the coast in July or August. It's hard to appreciate a beautiful stretch of sand when it's packed with sunbathers! So the theme appeals to me. Apart from that I think the title, the rhythm, the use of language and the beginning and ending are all fine. Best wishes, Robert.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Jim

I'd love to have a beach all to myself. This is an awesome write. Puts me right there. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If the opposite of 'pro' is 'con' would that make the opposite of 'progress' Congress? Just wonderin'....."
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

LMAO...ah, god

I couldn't post properly!!! my sides hurt. That congress/progress was a real treat! :D Jim