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A Heavenly Trio

A Heavenly Trio

The crescent moon
Shines bright in the sky
As Venus and Jupiter,
Make a rare appearance
A beautiful trio
Under dark heavens
December 1, 2008,
Clear chilly night

If you missed this glorious show,
May 11, 2011 will be the next time the trio
Makes a manifestation so close together
 

— Barbara Writes, Dec 01, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 6 months ago

I got an anonymous tipoff by text message

rushed outside and saw them making a smiley face with the moon, another night, I didn't see, the y were in front of each other and it looked like a supernova. Ah the heavens, heavenly, sublimely unreachable, for now cheers, Jess "They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety" Benjamin Franklin, wonder what he would think of the Patriot Act.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Jess

thanks for commenting. we had frown on our end just as beautiful though. i saw yall smile on the internet from australia. what a beauty it was. Respectfully Yours, Barbara