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Dec 01, 2008
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Within the azure waves
The bezel of my mind
cleft lights,
one more powerful
than another,
carving the clouds
for them to flow
into my heart.
And I reached glitters
in my ocean
of immortality.
I tear the diamonds
from above,
filling my emptiness
with the insurgent waters
of the azure waves.
With a single smile
I emblazed in me
the lights of the past.
cleft lights,
one more powerful
than another,
carving the clouds
for them to flow
into my heart.
And I reached glitters
in my ocean
of immortality.
I tear the diamonds
from above,
filling my emptiness
with the insurgent waters
of the azure waves.
With a single smile
I emblazed in me
the lights of the past.
— Unlight, Dec 01, 2008
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poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Johnnie
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Johnnie
Ink Dragon
17 years 7 months ago
Had to read this
Unlight
17 years 7 months ago
Getting bored of writing
Proprietress o…
17 years 7 months ago
the title caught my eye...
Unlight
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you, Proprietress.
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