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Within the azure waves

The bezel of my mind
cleft lights,
one more powerful
than another,
carving the clouds
for them to flow
into my heart.
And I reached glitters
in my ocean
of immortality.

I tear the diamonds
from above,
filling my emptiness
with the insurgent waters
of the azure waves.
With a single smile
I emblazed in me
the lights of the past.
— Unlight, Dec 01, 2008

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poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Johnnie

and I reached glitters etc this line kind of stuck a bit the poem itself is beautiful Chrys
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poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Johnnie

Better Chrys
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Ink Dragon

17 years 6 months ago

Had to read this

two times over, because at first I stumbled over the change of time in the last line but one. Having read it again now, it makes sense after all. So, another five star poem: Aren´t you getting bored? Just kidding, ID
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

17 years 5 months ago

the title caught my eye...

and the poem is even more beautiful than the title promises it to be! very well-written, very strong images. I was absolutely enthralled. much respect for such a good piece, kata