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Critically Rethinking Creation

Critically Rethinking Creation

I ask:
Do we ever stay long enough
with the pain to break through
our shells of indifference?

Do we ever unravel the Gordian Knot
in enough time to rewind the sefish imperative
operative
around our impenetrable heart of stone,
in our broken clamshells bereft of pearl, hard-
headed self-absorption?

And why don't we know without a doubt,
without a reasonable facsimile of progressive
ideology in a a conflagration
consternation and determination configuration
in a boxed-up metaphor, this alchemy of you and I,
ablaze in a blinding binding insight?

Being reasonably indeterminably intelligent, the
obfuscation passes unbeknownst even to the supporting
roles we play, inexorably linked to incomprehensible
and unvanquished nothings that pass for everything,
in the passing moments of all there is, ticking away like
the day and night in a land where time is but forgotten
if not for the call:  Wake up dreamer!

And I, like a disappearing act, needing only
"the ashtray, the remote control, the paddle game, this magazine
and the chair", walk away from you, like a stand-up heroine
in a movie filled with knee-jerk reactions,

end this Poem with no other signs of self-absorption
floating around in my ever-loving persona non grata...
— Kailashana, Nov 30, 2008

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Anna,

No man is an island, is the most untrue thing I ever read, we are all self absorbed in our own little world with our own view of the happening of life. that's what makes us individual and thank God or who ever you believe in. I would hate to have to live with some one just like me. I couldn't stand the constant agreeing. I love arguing my point of view. The agreeing and disagreeing that's what its all about for me, that's how I learn or teach. I say, be you in this ever changing madness we call life. some sit on the sofa others create the sofa but you won't find them any where near it. I think that's what your trying to say here, at lease it's what I got out of it. Do you see now my point we all have a different view? Great rant, food for thought! thanks, Eddie
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Lol. Welllllllll… for you

Lol. Welllllllll... for you maybe, I constantly argue with myself... never win even that one... "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

I have a few of these

I have a few of these verbose poems... Love to play with words.... Some are posted here in the pungent olfactory archives... lol. ~A "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

I have a few of these

I have a few of these verbose poems... Love to play with words.... Some are posted here in the pungent olfactory archives... lol. I even fixed the freaking site removal of my paragraphs... I wonder how and why that happens.. Grrrrrrrrrrr. ~A "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.
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leonard daranjo

17 years 6 months ago

Looks like a lot of introspection has gone into this

You know Anna, the first three questions brought about a twinge of guilt in me. These are the questions - not in the the same words - I keep asking myself. As a person trying to express myself through poetry, I feel that my efforts are just not painstaking enough. These lines: Do we ever stay long enough with the pain to break through our shells of indifference? Hit me the hardest sending my scurrying:: in our broken clamshells bereft of pearl, hard- headed self-absorption? I can hardly wait to finish and post a poem but I am not quite patient enough to dive into that seemingly unfathomable ocean to give holistic expression to my inner world. I feel like I am picking up cups of water and neglecting the ocean which surrounds me. I often feel like going into a long drawn silence and never writing a word unless it springs from the innermost depths of my soul. I hope - as in many cases it does happen - that I haven't misinterpreted what you meant to say. Thanks for sharing. Cheers ... Leonard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Honey, that poem went

Honey, that poem went everywhere.... so there's no CHANCE of any misinterpretation. Fishing lines secure... anything could be reeled in... Hug. ~A "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.