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My best'est friend!

  Friends and life sister's are the best,   but YOU are simply a cut above the rest!   Bright as a star that sit's in the milky way ,   always' willing to give it a try and ready to play.    Sensible, fun, and smart is why you always' shine,    No one in this world has a friend as great as mine.   Confident, brave and sure, I trust you above all.    When I am with you, I am more than ten feet tall..   Time together sealed the bond, now it is so very strong.    But distance and life now sing our sad and sweet song.   Absence does not matter to sister's of the soul.   Remembering to care and try is our primary goal.   I am so grateful for you, more than you could ever know.    If only I could send this wish with a present and a giant bow.  But please know I think of you with love, each and every day.   And that I eagerly await our time's when you can come and stay.
So I send my dreams to you, my soul sister and valued good friend,  May your life be filled with love, peace, and happiness, till it's far off end   
— DawningDaytripper, Nov 30, 2008

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

My best'est friend

I would have been delighted to have received this card from you~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

true friendship,

is hard to find, at least those that last a life time. I can say that I have one such friend that I call my wife. I love this write, it is true to life. thanks, Eddie
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Very well written

And the content is beautiful too, I would be pleased to have been the inspirator of such devotion and friendship, has the receiver answered her poem? I liked this and can find no fault in its construction. Yours from Ann of Norway, a friend in the air.