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Nov 28, 2008
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Under a blue-clouded sky
Under a pure blue-clouded skywe walked, and talked,of certain heaven, you and I.Even knowing what had seemedmesmerised by drifting,stately masses,azure deep,their puffed out cheeksshape-shifting curls of soft-billowed sleep.
We dreamed reflected shafts of light,
that played upon our sheltered eyes;
and teased each ribboned hope’s delight,
with false colours of our truth’s disguise
in yellow, Aspen-fingered blue,
bathed in cloying mountain dew;
wetter than this upturned face,
deep etched by lying's teardrop stain,
and promise-broken acid rain,
white kisses of our dead embrace.
— professor, Nov 28, 2008
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RSScheerer
17 years 6 months ago
professor
professor
17 years 6 months ago
Echo of the classics
Janice Pearce
17 years 6 months ago
Under a blue clouded sky
professor
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks Janice
Electric Blue
17 years 6 months ago
Under a Blue clouded, sky
professor
17 years 6 months ago
Thankyou Maggie