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Kailashana
Kailashana
Nov 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Passion

i feel You
quickening
inside my body
my senses
rush to meet You
octaves and
crescendoes
10000 tongues
thick with desire,
thick with the
scent of Us

no words now, my Love




— Kailashana, Nov 25, 2008

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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

Hi A

hi my dear poet fren, this is such a beautful piee from u. this is such a short piece, yet i fould it strangely beutiful. DONT FORGET TO CHECK out my latest poem and drop a comment there ok HUG ZARUL
professor

professor

17 years 6 months ago

Yes indeed Anna

sometimes there is no need for words when you are both inside each other. Evocative poem as always. Keith
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Tink

17 years 6 months ago

so short and so powerful

i enjoyed this one. well done. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink