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Cross

I thought I knew everything, but I was an amateur, under my adored crossI thought I knew everything, but I was an amateur, under my adored cross I am walking alone under the night Raise my eyes to your beautiful eyes, Yell out “I love you!” Yell out “I love you!”Raise my eyes to your beautiful eyes, Yell out “I love you!” Yell out “I love you!” Out of my mind, I got dreams in my scenes, when I was adored by foolsOut of my mind, I got dreams in my scenes, when I was adored by fools Raise my eyes to your beautiful eyes, Yell out “I love you!” Yell out “I love you!”Raise my eyes to your beautiful eyes, Yell out “I love you!” Yell out “I love you!” I am walking alone under the night Dream of me every night you’re ashamed of meTry again, try again, try again, try againDream of me every night you’re ashamed of meTry again, try again, try again, try again This isn’t me or what I once was
— washing tears, Nov 24, 2008

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Region, Country: sandusky, ohio, USA

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poewriter58

17 years 5 months ago

tears

would I have scenes work better? these are reading like lyrics Chrys