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The New Emerald City

There are a plethora of preponderances,
and a myriad of matters on my mind;
like why so many people go out of their way
to be mean, when it's easier to be kind.

For instance, I wouldn't pay to eat beef off the ground,
but I do enjoy eating my ground beef;
but how about the the fact there's so many Indians
who all think they aught to be chief.

Why, is it something "bad" that one hears
from people one do not even "play",
everyone not in the mood becomes a critic,
how I wish these folks would just go away.

They say that the children are our future
but that's frightening, what with all of their "fads";
how can our future embarrass themselves,
not to mention their Moms and their Dads?

Then, there's the puppet politicians
with their empty promises and also their greed,
they're sidetracked by their personal agendas
trying not to get caught, as they "lead"!

It's like we're all living in the Land of Oz,
where our hopes and dreams have all faded,
that Emerald City hasn't got much on us,
considering how completely we're all "jaded"!
— docmaverick, Nov 24, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

yenti

yenti

17 years 6 months ago

Yes

Nice flow of the wrongs that are here, well written, but as I always say we cannot change this way of man, and I can't really understand what they would all find, as a goal to aim at that will bring out the love there is, which would bind them all in a single entity, with so many beautiful facets. Yours Ian.T
AW

Antoinette Mar…

17 years 6 months ago

Emerald City

Actually Emerald City isn't new Doc, its as old as it's story with no hope of changes...what? did you say the new president will bring change....naw...not a chance! Loved the write though you always reach out and "touch" me in some way!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

The New Emerald City

doc, You have a great way of expressing your thoughts with a touch of humor~ That is what I like about your poems! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________