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Validate Me!!

I know you don't see me
but know that I am here
I admire your work
and have read it all
but comments I can not leave there.

I've stood and cheered
frowned and jeered
wrote responses line after line
that technical glitch
is a son-of-a-bitch
for not letting me post opinions of mine!

There are new members
who've captured my attention
my thanks, I'd love to make mention
a warm welcome
and a wave
but my comments just won't save!

Validate me
O technical one!
So that I may communicate with my peers
I hope it happens soon
before smoke comes out my ears!

** Just a playful write about the frustrations of the validation errors....  :~) **
— infinite_dwarf, Nov 23, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

I love how you take the

I love how you take the ordinary ever-day-events of life & do your Jess-thing with them.... cheers!!! Validation errors... how the fuck can I still have validation errors after all these years in the remorseless sea of technicality.. hehehehe Hug. ~A "Speech is blasphemy. Silence a lie. Above speech and silence is a way out." I-tuan.
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Drarf

Nice one.......... Patty
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Tink

17 years 6 months ago

YEAH JESS!!!!

I like it, and hey look I commented!!!!! very clever.
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

validate poem

I.D., Hey! That's terriffic! wcw
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barbsdad2003

17 years 6 months ago

Marvelous

A very pleasant rant, this. Covers my sentiments nicely. We're in synch. Such sweet harmony. And thanx, Chuck
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 6 months ago

Thx all!

Just a coping mechanism.... Thank you to all who read and commented. Now that the problem has more or less been fixed, I'll go around to all the works I missed and didn't/couldn't comment on. Just have to remember what I was gonna say! Frost!!! Nice to see you, man! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- - "If the S.W.A.T team breaks down your door, do they have to replace it later?" - "If you don't pay your exorcist, do you get repossessed?"
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 6 months ago

Yes...

Give me my validation or give me... well something... loved it Jess.... Richard