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Nov 23, 2008
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Validate Me!!
I know you don't see me
but know that I am here
I admire your work
and have read it all
but comments I can not leave there.
I've stood and cheered
frowned and jeered
wrote responses line after line
that technical glitch
is a son-of-a-bitch
for not letting me post opinions of mine!
There are new members
who've captured my attention
my thanks, I'd love to make mention
a warm welcome
and a wave
but my comments just won't save!
Validate me
O technical one!
So that I may communicate with my peers
I hope it happens soon
before smoke comes out my ears!
** Just a playful write about the frustrations of the validation errors.... :~) **
but know that I am here
I admire your work
and have read it all
but comments I can not leave there.
I've stood and cheered
frowned and jeered
wrote responses line after line
that technical glitch
is a son-of-a-bitch
for not letting me post opinions of mine!
There are new members
who've captured my attention
my thanks, I'd love to make mention
a warm welcome
and a wave
but my comments just won't save!
Validate me
O technical one!
So that I may communicate with my peers
I hope it happens soon
before smoke comes out my ears!
** Just a playful write about the frustrations of the validation errors.... :~) **
— infinite_dwarf, Nov 23, 2008
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Critiques
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
I love how you take the
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Drarf
Tink
17 years 6 months ago
YEAH JESS!!!!
W.C.Wampler
17 years 6 months ago
validate poem
Frost Smith
17 years 6 months ago
Infinite_Dwarf...
barbsdad2003
17 years 6 months ago
Marvelous
infinite_dwarf
17 years 6 months ago
Thx all!
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
Yes...