theladyblue

Nov 23, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Surrealist Realist

My I’s are leaking soul
While my eyes miss
You’re strange distortion
I find peace is of us on the soil
And u read me like
What the H E double hockey sticks?!?!?
If only I let you c
You would look and book
Trust and know that my brand
Is tainted and I’m not talkin cockpit
Eye’m seein shit for real
You may c what you wish
Eye am stuck seein’ lucidity

— theladyblue, Nov 23, 2008

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Critiques

yenti

17 years 6 months ago

Yes

The I's have it, quite a culture shock well written, yours I an .Tea

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

thanks so much

<3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

WOW!!!

I love the way you use the brush strokes of Surrealist painters to turn them into words. "A painter can paint a bird in flight and it's a beautiful sight. But it's the poet that puts the wind in its wings so that it can soar to the mountain tops" Great job your are an artist with many levels! I am absolutely overwhelm by your ability. thanks, Eddie

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

Oh my Eddie!

that is beyond a compliment!!! If you like my 'painting with words' you should read 'Finding Eve' and 'Fresh Paint' they are far better than this my friend but thank you so much!!! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

Mason King

17 years 6 months ago

Great Writng Emarie! I agree

Great Writng Emarie! I agree with Ed, totally subtle, like a sketch that looks more intricate with every view. Bravo. M

orgami

17 years 6 months ago

Wow love the Avatar art

What a great poem like a treat to discover I remember Carolee and I would share a typewriter and each would write a poem and just leave it in the machine in our apartment and in passing through the day would sit and read her works She is still a great poet I think but "finding" the poems like these delicious finds I like how you use your words to create a skillful collage fantastic!

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

So...

here I sit just minding my own business and writing moderate, at best, poetry and all of a sudden I am graced with awesome comments from, not one, but two of the best modern poets I know!!!!! Holy crap I'm gonna have to like sacrifice a lamb or something to the poetry Gods lol!!! Ok ok jk round of course but I truly am flattered that the both of you have taken the time to read and comment!!! It means the world to me! 8) <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

Tink

17 years 6 months ago

Emarie,I must say I had to

Emarie, I must say I had to read this a few times. I love the way you put it all together. "Eye’m seein shit for real You may c what you wish Eye am stuck seein’ lucidity" are my favorite lines! Good job! Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink

theladyblue

17 years 6 months ago

Thanks so much Tink!!!<3

Thanks so much Tink!!! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "Tempted by your Tainted Love I sure do love the way you come inside my crystal ball..." Buckcherry 'Next to You'

Ink Dragon

17 years 6 months ago

Funnily enough

the similarity between "I" and "eye" has long since struck me as obvious. I am glad to find out I am not the only one... Very artful, very artistical write, ID P.S. I wonder if you would like to take a peek at my "Reflection on the senses connected" (because of the "I"s)? I would be honoured.