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Nov 21, 2008
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Beatnik Reentry
four…
…it’s a wild glide baby
liquid steel speed
a searing shriek through friction
into crushing atmosphere
from barrenness so black
it stains the brain
to blue so effortlessly wide
that it becomes the sky...
three…
…it’s a crazed slide baby
scorched acceleration
whispers upwards into scream
turning curve of world
into freefall whirl
of yawning drop so deep
it swallows up your soul…
two…
…get ready for it baby
snap restraining straps
close the gold-lined helmet visor
do a final systems check
take one last final hit
hold in that shaking breath
cuz here it comes now baby....
...ONE…
shockwave speed that soars
across a minuscule divide
from killing, airless emptiness
to living, breathing world…
…it’s a wild glide baby
liquid steel speed
a searing shriek through friction
into crushing atmosphere
from barrenness so black
it stains the brain
to blue so effortlessly wide
that it becomes the sky...
three…
…it’s a crazed slide baby
scorched acceleration
whispers upwards into scream
turning curve of world
into freefall whirl
of yawning drop so deep
it swallows up your soul…
two…
…get ready for it baby
snap restraining straps
close the gold-lined helmet visor
do a final systems check
take one last final hit
hold in that shaking breath
cuz here it comes now baby....
...ONE…
shockwave speed that soars
across a minuscule divide
from killing, airless emptiness
to living, breathing world…
— Race_9togo, Nov 21, 2008
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Critiques
themoonman
17 years 6 months ago
and blast off...
Race_9togo
17 years 6 months ago
Thanks
Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
Excellent Write, Race!
Race_9togo
17 years 6 months ago
thanks