Should I?

Please change all the lower case i to capital I Last line Needs to be I not you. Good write otherwise. Patty

Its a beautiful poem, I just re-read it, Great job. Stand on you beliefs in your heart. Patty

Excellent write. I loved it. I hope you don't mind me taking the liberty to do a little correcting on it. Mostly tense changes. Should I also go to Where the world goes? Or should I stay behind And get aside to doze? Should I stand against all? And can I do thus? Or should I let my voice Get lost in the world’s fuss? Should I shout and tell the world What my heart wants? Or should I then shut my mouth And suppress all my thoughts? Should I forget everything And let my heart not think? Or should I take this bitter cup And force myself to drink. Should I also believe what Everyone considers true? Or should I just shun everything And trust in what I do. Oh, what to say and what to do When you are so tightly bound When every door is shut on you You've got to hang around! You are welcome to use my suggestions or to ignore them as you wish. I love this write. Respectfully, Rett: "Did you ever wonder if the politicians what want to ban guns went hunting with Dick Cheney?" Rett: 2008

wafi It is a beautiful poem. I like it.