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Toadstool Perspective

they grow in rings
because they're round
each mushroom cap
the flower of a mass
of worm-like tendrils
unseen beneath
the warm and watered earth
and each release of spores
will increase each
new circle of new mold
growing fresh around the old
and thus the toadstool ring will grow.

or if you prefer...

the toadstool stands alone
until the small and dainty feet
of tiny winged deathless Folk
dance sparkling around its rim
and as another joins the fun
they dance up timeless dreams
to snare the souls of men
and toadstools grow
where tiny feet tread earth
then another joins the others
and then another
and thus the ring of toadstools grows
each circle dance a new beginning
each pair of little feet increasing
the boundary of the toadstool ring
forever widening.

who can say which choice is right?
the first is made of reason's might,
called science, superstition's blight
the second creeps in from the dark
that haunts the edges of soul's light

I won't say which one I choose
that is something I won't do
I would prefer to leave that choice
its point of view
and consequence
to you.
— Race_9togo, Nov 20, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Critiques

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 6 months ago

Toadstool Perspective

I think the title is great. the language was well understood. I enjoyed the rhythm and pacing it was good from beginning to end. the internal logic from start was good from beginning to end. Great poem. Every time i see a mushroom I will think of you and wonder what it does under neath the earth. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

I smiled when I read your

I smiled when I read your comment - if You think of me whenever you see a mushroom because of my poem, that is the highest of compliments! Thank you for it, very much Jim